Friday, 6 June 2014

A time i were successful

Recount:A time I was successful.
WALT:Retell of a past experience.
WILF:Audience half has all the information need.

"Far look at all the people" I said starring around the Netball court. I don't think I can play.

I stood there starirng at Okaihau GA nervously,I was frightened.

The whistle blew the game started, I did not know what to do.

It was Okaihau's ball. The center gave the ball to the GA.I took a deep breath  and caught the ball. I felt proud of my self.
I passed the ball to Ruby then we got a goal.

Oh well we lost by five but at least we had a great time playing Netball.

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